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About Me Member General Fiction Writer John23/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 9 Months
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Wed Mar 11, 2009, 8:27 PM
So I just made a DA account. I am not much of a artist when it comes to visual art so I probably wont be adding much of that sort other then some photos. Hopefully my stories will make up for it though. I am a bit of a beginning writer so any feedback you could offer me would be much appreciated. Don't worry about hurting my feelings. I would rather get the truth then fluffy words.

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  • Current Residence: Colorado
  • Interests: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
  • Favourite movie: The Gamers
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~quidditch-chick Apr 14, 2009, 6:19:34 PM
John! It's Kelly... Liz's friend from Michaels... (And hey, if you don't remember me, then just ignore this. :D)

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"The scariest thing in the world (besides white canvas) is if mirrors remembered everything they saw." --Flip
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~Phoenixfirewolf Mar 12, 2009, 4:09:50 PM
HI!!!

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Writers have to simultaneously believe the following two things:
1) The story I am now working on is the greatest work of genius ever written in English.
2) The story I am now working on is worthless drivel.
~Orson Scott Card
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Mood: Optimism ~TheArgentAvenger Mar 12, 2009, 4:18:19 PM
Hello. Figured I would try using DA so that people could actually read some of my stories. I would apreciate your feedback for sure since your a writer and such.
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~Phoenixfirewolf Mar 12, 2009, 5:52:03 PM
sure. I would be happy to crit. Note though, that if I do a crit, it'll be a real one. No fluffy bunny, though I do try to point out stuff I like as well as stuff that isn't working for me. Also note, it is all my opinion, and opinions vary greatly, especially in writing.

would you rather I do a crit in comments or copy them into a word document and crit them like that?

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Writers have to simultaneously believe the following two things:
1) The story I am now working on is the greatest work of genius ever written in English.
2) The story I am now working on is worthless drivel.
~Orson Scott Card
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~TheArgentAvenger Mar 12, 2009, 8:06:50 PM
I actually put in my first journal entry that I want honest criticism not fluff so feel free. I guess you should do it in the comments. If I don't want others to see it I can always delete it after I read it right?
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~Phoenixfirewolf Mar 15, 2009, 6:52:06 AM
ok, just wanted to make sure what you wanted :) and yeah, I know you said you didn't want fluff. I just felt I had to warn. ^^

--
Writers have to simultaneously believe the following two things:
1) The story I am now working on is the greatest work of genius ever written in English.
2) The story I am now working on is worthless drivel.
~Orson Scott Card
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